Friday 16 November 2012

INFORMAL LETTER (FOR 1ST BTO.)

Here you can post your informal letters as comments. Remember to WRITE YOUR NAME AND SURNAME so I can correct it. See you in class.

18 comments:

  1. INFORMAL LETTER BY AMPARO MONTES PÉREZ 1ºBTO.C
    17th November

    Hello Paula,

    Sorry I haven't written sooner. Where have you been recently? I have sent you a video of my summer vacation, and you haven't sent me any video! Seriously, I'm really sorry for not having written before.

    I have had a wonderful summer. I love hiking, and I have been to the mountain. There I met a boy, named Robert and he lives in Seville! What a coincidence! I would like that one day you known Robert. It is very nice! He told me he is going to give me a horse to go for a walk the two! It's fantastic! Guess what? My parents have given me a dog! It's a Pomeranian, he is very small and furry. I'm going to send a photo for you to he see.

    So how are things? Do you like your new home in the País Vasco? Have you started classes at school? Do you speak any Euskera? I'd love to see you so maybe I can go and visit you this year. What do you think? I promise to learn some Euskera.

    Anyway, I have to stop writing now. I'm got to go. My mum and me we are going shopping. Write soon and please keep in touch and tell me all the news. ok? I miss you!

    Take care. Love,
    Amparo.

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    1. I would like you to meet Robert one day, he is very nice.
      ... A photo for you to see him.
      ... Home in the Basque Country?
      I've got to go.

      MARK:

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  2. Hi Alba:
    Sorry I haven’t written sooner because that month I have had a lot of exams and projects and I didn’t have any time to write a letter. Yesterday I finished my exams and now I’ve got time to write to you.
    Today my holidays have started and I’ve a lot of plans for this summer. Tomorrow I will go with my parents and Pablo to Isla Cristina. We are going to stay there some weeks, I think that we are going to spend there three weeks, but it isn’t too sure. I think we will spend a great summer in Isla Cristina! Then I will go with my friends Cristina, Sara and Elena to the United States. I miss them a lot because I haven’t seen their since 2011 and I want to hug them soon. And after that I will stay in my village the rest of the summer. Alba, you can come to my flat in Isla Cristina for a weekend. When you ask it to your parents phone me and tell me what they have said you.
    Anyway, that’s enough about me. What about your school’s marks? What are you going to do this summer? Are you going to go to London again or are you going to come to my village to visit your grandparents? If you come to Salteras, call me and if I was here we would meet and go to the café or to the cinema.
    Sorry, I’ve to go to finish my suitcase! I have to bring a lot of clothes and I have to think what I’m going to bring with me. Write me soon and tell me about you.
    Love,
    Marta.

    Marta Muñoz Moral.

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    1. ... THIS month I have had a lot of exams
      ... I will go to Isla Cristina with my parents and Pablo.
      ... We are going to stay ther FOR some weeks.
      ...I haven't seen THEM since 2011
      ... In my village FOR the rest of the summer...
      ... What they have said TO you.
      .. And if I AM here, we can go...
      ... Write TO me soon.

      Mark: 6'5

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  3. Hi Leire

    It´s been ages since i last heard from you, i hope you´re well, i´m writting you this letter to tell you about my new life and i think you want to ask me some questions, how was last summer? and how am i spending this year?
    I want only to tell you that my summer has been very funny and study a little, i miss the long summer days with nothing to do but have fun. I was playing with the music band for the romeria, the fair and spend a good time with my friends.
    I would like to see you, also we need to speak i miss our long conversations and i miss you too. Guess what? at the end of the year i visit my old school (Cardenal Spinola (las esclavas)) but this year i´m studying in I.E.S. Heliche to study baccalaureate and there i have meet very people, now they´re my friends.
    And finally, write soon and please keep in touch! and i miss you!! =)

    Love!!
    xoxo =)
    Carmen María Fernández Cárdenas de 1º de bach. C

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    1. You use the first person promoun "i", which is wrong. Remember its always written in capitals: "I".
      ... I haven't studied much
      ...I visitED my school...
      ...I have met a lot of people.lease, write back soon and keep in touch. I miss you!

      Mark: 6

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  4. Hi Kseniya

    I am writting this letter because you haven't been answering my other letters. I know that you have got very homeworks and you haven't got any time for nothing else.

    I have been playing tennis every days and this saturday I have a tennis tournament in the olimpic Stadium. I have been practise tennis with my friend Manolo de la Carrera because this tennis match is very important, It's the Seville Cup and this tournament is only once a year.

    So How are things? What was the Russian Ballet like? I have lisened that it was beautifoul. I read on Internet the notice..;)

    Anyway, I've got to stop now. I'm going to the Seville Museum with my fathers. Write to me please and tell me all the news and please call me for Skipe.

    Cheers, Alfonso


    Alfonso Verde González 1ºBachillerato C

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    1. I am WRITING this...
      ...you haven't answered my othe letters...
      I have been PRACTISING...
      ..ñthis tournament only takes place once a year.
      ...I have HEARD that it was BEAUTIFUL
      ..I tead the news on the internet
      ..with my PARENTS
      ...call me via skype.

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  5. Hello, Silvestre
    Sorry I have not written becouse I have a lot of homework every day and in the last Summer I worked in a supermarket in my village.
    I am very stress, becouse first of Bachillerato is too hard.
    In olivares has not changed, but London is renewing every day I guess.

    Anyway. That is enought about me.
    What about you? Have you child any child yet?
    If you have children ,You will come in Summer to my home, you are invited.
    Now I am going to go to Seville, for buy clothes for the nativity.
    I will see you soon. Rafael Torregrosa González 1903

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    1. Sorry I have not written BECAUSE ...
      And LAST SUMMER I worked...
      I'm very STRESSED, BECAUSE ...
      Olivares has not changed...

      That is ENOUGH about me.
      Have you any children yet?
      You CAN come to my house
      To Seville, TO BUY some clothes for CHRISTMAS.

      Mark: 4

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  6. Hi Leopold
    Sorry I haven´t written sooner, but
    I´ve been studied
    I´m exhausted! I´ve been played football and I´ve backache
    What else? Well, the big news is that
    I have been won the lottery.
    Anyway, that´s enough about me.
    What about you? have you been studied yet?
    Oh, before I forget, we have been passed a test apparently,
    There´s a really good new.
    I´ve got to go. My parents are calling me to dinner
    goodbye

    jose pablo pallares mendez 1º bachillerato C

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    1. ...but I've been STUDYING
      I've been PLAYING football
      I have a backache.
      I have won the lottery
      ...Have you finished studyind yet?
      ...we have passed

      Mark: 4

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  7. Ángela María Martín López 1ºbach C
    Hi!
    Sorry I haven't written to you so much in these last months, I’ve been busy with my studies. I’m studying first of bachelor. As you know, I wanted study a bachelor of art, but my father thought this is better for me. I admit, I’m very happy with this bachelor but it not easy, and I am working hard to have good marks.

    What about you? How have been these last months? The last I heard from you is that you had a new pet!! What you are studying?

    Anyway, I've got to end the letter because i have to finish my homework before seven o'clock for go with my parents to visit a museum.

    If you want I can send you the next time the photos of the museum and some songs that I’ve been listening recently of guns n’ roses, have you ever listened anything of this group?

    Well, I hope you write me soon!
    Love,
    Angie.

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    1. The first year for my bachelor's degree...
      What ARE YOU studying?
      ..before seven o'clock TO GO TO VISIT A MUSEUM WITH MY PARENTS
      If you want ME TO, next time I can send you the photos of the museum and some GUNS'N'ROSES SONGS THAT I'VE BEEN LISTENING TO RECENTLY.
      Have you ever heard anything BY this band?

      I hope you writ TO me soon

      Mark: 8

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  8. Jose Cantero Mateo19 November 2012 at 15:49

    18th November



    Hello Cristina,

    How are you? I know that you are living in London. Are you living with a family or in a flat? I would like to go and visit you. I can´t go, because I haven´t got enought money. I am working in Seville to go to visit you, in December. I am in the capital, everything goes very well. I see a your parents everydays.I hope you can read this letter and you can answer and tell me everything about you.

    Love,
    Jose Cantero

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  9. Everything is going very well
    I see your parents everyday.

    Your letter isn't very well organised...

    Mark: 5

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  10. hi im carmen vargas elena dominguez 4 ESO, here's my writing:

    Hi Mark, I hope you all good fence, and I hope to see you pronto.No is nothing since last summer, where did you get?., I miss you since the last day we were to take a drink or 2 or 3 weeks later I found out that you'd moved to Madrid for a few months, by trabajo.Yo problems are, it is very hard for you, here is where you porq all your family and friends ..... But do not worry I wish you all the best and come back soon, I need to see you, because to me you especial.Muchos kisses for you and your family, take careI hope you can answer me soon besos

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